Okay Marcus… You have a little of this and a little of that… May I suggest that you hang onto some of the pictures to resubmit during the week for that type of picture? The top image of the self-portrait has beautiful light and is perfect for the last assignment. The second one down is lovely for this assignment. You are filling the frame thinking about composition and focal point with structure. Third one down would work for this week as well but it's a little bit hot meaning a little bit too contrasty where the blacks are blocked up and the whites blown out. Otherwise it's nicely seen and I appreciate the fact that you tried to edit it. The next one down of the Lieberman sculpture is pretty good. I'm glad you didn't include the whole sculpture but moved in on it and considered the abstract shapes against the structure of the buildings and the sky. The next one down would work for the water assignment coming up. I was amused by the one Muscovy duck amidst all the mallards… He seemed to be having a good time. Finally the last one is okay for this assignment the structure is good in the light decent. Keep going!
Okay Marcus… You have a little of this and a little of that… May I suggest that you hang onto some of the pictures to resubmit during the week for that type of picture? The top image of the self-portrait has beautiful light and is perfect for the last assignment. The second one down is lovely for this assignment. You are filling the frame thinking about composition and focal point with structure. Third one down would work for this week as well but it's a little bit hot meaning a little bit too contrasty where the blacks are blocked up and the whites blown out. Otherwise it's nicely seen and I appreciate the fact that you tried to edit it. The next one down of the Lieberman sculpture is pretty good. I'm glad you didn't include the whole sculpture but moved in on it and considered the abstract shapes against the structure of the buildings and the sky. The next one down would work for the water assignment coming up. I was amused by the one Muscovy duck amidst all the mallards… He seemed to be having a good time. Finally the last one is okay for this assignment the structure is good in the light decent. Keep going!
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