Okay Jorge, you are on the right track. I see that you're filling the frame with the architectural elements and trying to find composition. My main criticism would be back off a little bit with the editing. Try not to push the contrast quite so hard especially with the picture of St. Albert and the one below it and the last one. We want to avoid blowing out whites and blocking up blacks. I can see evidence of a little vignetting which is good we want to keep that subtle and not to obvious though. The front of the Albertus library as messed up color… It would be better in black-and-white or perhaps you adjusted it to be like this?
I'll be taking a look at the original shots in your Google drive. As every new doctor has to pledge, first do no harm as they become MDs so to we want to improve not degrade our images in the editing process.
Okay Jorge, you are on the right track. I see that you're filling the frame with the architectural elements and trying to find composition. My main criticism would be back off a little bit with the editing. Try not to push the contrast quite so hard especially with the picture of St. Albert and the one below it and the last one. We want to avoid blowing out whites and blocking up blacks. I can see evidence of a little vignetting which is good we want to keep that subtle and not to obvious though. The front of the Albertus library as messed up color… It would be better in black-and-white or perhaps you adjusted it to be like this?
ReplyDeleteI'll be taking a look at the original shots in your Google drive. As every new doctor has to pledge, first do no harm as they become MDs so to we want to improve not degrade our images in the editing process.