Okay this is a good example of how doing lots of shooting helps create strong work. Not all of them are that strong but you have enough good ones here because of the sheer number. Starting at the bottom I love the simple bands of horizontal lines. The next one up has good composition in the way you placed the pier at the top of the frame and looked at the wall and other elements below. Some of the pictures that have a crooked horizon line would be improved by straightening that and making it parallel to the edge of the frame. Remember not to just take pictures of "a place" but to use details and elements to create interesting compositions that use light and composition. The eighth one down has a lovely sky and light on the jetty going out but the tilted horizon kind of wrecks the picture for me. It only takes a second to straighten it out on your phone. That can be done after the fact.
Glad to see you got outside on a cold winter day like this. Keep going!
Okay this is a good example of how doing lots of shooting helps create strong work. Not all of them are that strong but you have enough good ones here because of the sheer number. Starting at the bottom I love the simple bands of horizontal lines. The next one up has good composition in the way you placed the pier at the top of the frame and looked at the wall and other elements below. Some of the pictures that have a crooked horizon line would be improved by straightening that and making it parallel to the edge of the frame. Remember not to just take pictures of "a place" but to use details and elements to create interesting compositions that use light and composition. The eighth one down has a lovely sky and light on the jetty going out but the tilted horizon kind of wrecks the picture for me. It only takes a second to straighten it out on your phone. That can be done after the fact.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you got outside on a cold winter day like this. Keep going!
I still don't have any of your pictures in Google drive. That super important!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the feedback, I upload the picture in the google drive the same day I post it here. I’ll make sure I’ll doble check on that.
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