My first reaction was that boy these are cropped and really quite narrowly… In looking at the pictures you posted on your Google drive, I see that's how your aspect ratio on your phone is set up. It's such an extreme 2 to 1 ratio that it's difficult to compose in the frame like this. If I were you I would go into your camera settings and put them back to a more normal ratio. Next I'm trying to figure out why some of the highlights are so gray. The exposures generally are pretty good in your drive. And in general they are better with no cropping and no editing. As every doctor must declare when the get to graduate from medical school, the ancient dictum of Hippocrates, "first do no harm". My favorite group in your drive is represented by the second one up from the bottom but without the cropping they are so much stronger. Think about leaving space in front of the face. I would also crop from the top just to the top edge of her head. Pretty good series all in all.
My first reaction was that boy these are cropped and really quite narrowly… In looking at the pictures you posted on your Google drive, I see that's how your aspect ratio on your phone is set up. It's such an extreme 2 to 1 ratio that it's difficult to compose in the frame like this. If I were you I would go into your camera settings and put them back to a more normal ratio. Next I'm trying to figure out why some of the highlights are so gray. The exposures generally are pretty good in your drive. And in general they are better with no cropping and no editing. As every doctor must declare when the get to graduate from medical school, the ancient dictum of Hippocrates, "first do no harm". My favorite group in your drive is represented by the second one up from the bottom but without the cropping they are so much stronger. Think about leaving space in front of the face. I would also crop from the top just to the top edge of her head. Pretty good series all in all.
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